Class Post - Review - "Drum Girl Dreaming"

There is something about the poetry of Margarita Engle that speaks to me.  The Newbery honor winner has a way of making the lives of others as relatable to me  as my own life.  Her newest poem is presented as a picture book, Drum Dream Girl: How One Girl’s Courage Changed Music, illustrated by Rafael Lopez.

Inspired by the story of Millo Castro Zaldarriaga, a Chinese-African-Cuban girl in the early-mid twentieth century, Drum Dream Girl presents a young girl who dreams of playing the drums, “of pounding tall conga drums/ tapping small bongo drums/ and boom boom booming/ with long, loud sticks/ on big, round, silvery/ moon-bright timbales.” (Emphasis by the author.)  Despite her aspirations, she is told that only boys may play the drums.  So the girl continues to dream, playing her own imaginary music, until her father allows her to have a teacher, who eventually decides the girl is ready to play the drums in public.

Throughout this poem, Engle makes use of figurative language, alliteration (“When she walked under/ wind-wavy palm trees,”) and sometimes repetition for impact.  Upon meeting her music teacher, “The girl knew so much/ but he taught her more/ and more/ and more/ and she practiced/ and she practiced/ and she practiced.”   The poem ends with the positive affirmation that “both girls and boys/ should feel free/ to dream.”

I cannot talk about Engle’s beautiful poem without also praises Lopez’s astounding paintings.  Brimming with color and spirit, these illustrations bring to life the girl’s dreams of drumming.  She drums while sitting on the crescent moon, while swimming under the ocean as a mermaid and on tables and chairs while floating through the air.  When her father decides to let her drum, Lopez depicts the girl being pulled back to Earth by brightly colored ribbons.  On the final page, while the girl happily drums, a boy with a drawing pad floats above her on his own dreaming cloud, while a smiling moon looks down on them both.  Lopez’s art perfectly complements the rhythm and spirit of Engle’s poetry.

Engle includes as historical note at the end of the book to tell readers and listeners about the inspiration for the poem, and gives details about Zaldarriaga’s life, which includes playing for president Franklin D. Roosevelt.

I am going to enjoy sharing this book with my patrons, and I already know what kind of poetry break I would like to employ.  After reading the poem once, I would like to show off the illustrations, especially the most imaginative ones, and block out the text and let the children create their own dreamy visions for these pictures.  What do they dream about that they can see within these images?  When the girl’s dream gives her wings to play drums on the flower tops, what do you see?  What would you like to do?  When the children have an idea of what their dreams might be, I would read the poem again, and see if they can hear their dreams in the words as well.

Engle, Margarita.  Drum Dream Girl: How One Girl’s Courage Changed Music. Illustrated by Rafael Lopez.  Boston: Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, 2015.  ISBN: 9780544102293

Class Post - "Walking on Earth and Touching the Sky"

 Sometimes people can surprise you.  The depths of their thoughts of feelings may not have an outlet through which to be expressed, but if you give them an outlet, there is no telling what you might learn.  At the Red Cloud Indian School, poet and teacher Timothy P. McLaughlin took the writings of his young Lakota students and collecting them into Walking on Earth and Touching the Sky: Poetry and Prose by Lakota Youth at the Red Cloud Indian School.

Collecting the works of middle school aged students from the Pine Ridge Indian Reservation in South Dakota, Walking on Earth and Touching the Sky reveals the thoughts and emotions of a variety of students through their writings.  Sometimes prose paragraphs and sometimes various forms of poetry, these works are very powerful.  They reveal feelings about death, racism and poverty, as well as identity, religion and living with and in the Lakota heritage.

This collection opens with a section features works about the natural world.  “Ocean” by Duncan Deon says, “The ocean is the flow of the world/ as we are the flow of nature/ and its elements.”  Similar poems follow about the sun and stars.  Different students employ different poetic and literary devices.  Dustin Star Comes Out writes a haiku about nature (“It blooms without fear.”) and Clementine Bourdeaux employs metaphor:

“When you laugh, it’s an echo of your past.

The moon is a round diamond.

The stars are pieces of memory.

The ocean is a blanket of dreams that last forever.

A rainbow is a bridge to your future.”

Some of the poems and prose created by the students reveal dark thoughts from a hard and troubling life.  In a poem entitled “Misery,” Andrew Herman writes, “Indian misery is when somebody takes your land./ Indian misery is when somebody kills your friends.”  While sometimes heartbreaking to read, these writings must have been essential to these students in order to express themselves.  Sometimes thoughts can never be heard until they are written down.

This book is arranged into different segments with an overall theme, such as “Natural World,” “Native Thoughts,” and “Language.”  Each segment opens with a small introduction by McLaughlin and a painting by S.D. Nelson.  This introduction puts the reader into the correct mindset to then experience the students’ writings.  McLaughlin also wrote a general introduction to the whole collection that gives the reader an overview of the history of the Red Cloud Indian School and some context for understanding the students’ lives.  McLaughlin also included an author’s note in which he wrote about his personal experiences with the school and its students.

There is a lot to enjoy, experience and digest in this collection, and there is much that can be learned and built upon.  One poem I thought would make for a good patron exercise is called “Seven Ways of Looking at Eagles” by Tonia Scabby Face.

“One way is how he soars high above the clouds.

The second way is when the eagle sits on a tree branch

looking over the countryside.

The third way is when he grabs his prey on the prairie.

The fourth way is when his protective eyes are keeping you safe at all times.

The fifth way is when the eagle lets us borrow his feathers.

The sixth way is when he talks to the rest of the sacred animals

so they can also keep you protected.

The seventh way is how the eagle sits waiting for your own flight to the sky.”

 This poem chose to write about something from the natural world that had a specific significance to her.  The idea behind this poem, however, could be adapted into almost anything.  Students and patrons could be invited to write a poem about seven ways to look at something or someone important to them, like a family member or a pet, or even something mundane, like a fork.  The results could be quite interesting.

McLaughlin, Timothy P., ed. Walking on Earth and Touching the Sky: Poetry and Prose by Lakota Youth at Red Cloud Indian School.  Paintings by S.D. Nelson.  Foreward by Joseph M. Marshall III.  New York: Abrams Books for Young Readers, 2012.  ISBN: 9781419701795

Class Post - Review - "A Kick in the Head"

I have found that sometimes introducing youth to new and different forms of poetry can be daunting.  It can be made much easier by introducing to the mix an element of fun.  This is what editor Paul B. Janeczko and illustrator Chris Raschka have accomplished with the collection A Kick in the Head: An Everyday Guide to Poetic Forms.

Janeczko collected poems to exemplify 29 different poetic forms, from the familiar (the haiku, the sonnet) to the somewhat less familiar (the aubade, the villanelle).  Some forms have only one representative poem, but some have two, often to present a contrast.  For example, in the case of the limerick, the first poem offered is from Edward Lear: 

“There was an Old Lady whose folly

Induced her to sit in a holly;

Whereupon, by a thorn

Her dress heing torn,

She quickly became melancholy.”

To illustrate how poets can play within a form and break the rules, Janeczko contrasted this classic limerick with a selection from Steven Herrick:

“There once was a limerick called Steven

whose rhyme scheme was very uneven

it didn’t make sense

it wasn’t funny

and who’d call a limerick Steven anyway?”

I really appreciated these contrasting examples, as they illustrate very well the axiom, “First learn the rules, then you can break them.”  I think these poems will help readers realize that those some forms of poetry have rules, the beauty of poetry is that once you understand these rules, they are fluid.

Janeczko’s selections for poems are varied.  He highlights classic poems from William Blake, Edward Lear and William Shakespeare, as well as modern poets like Alice Schertle and Gary Soto.  There were even some poets with whom I was not familiar, such as Penny Harter.

The arrangement of the poems works very well.  Janeczko starts with the simplest forms, such as couplets, then moves to more complicated forms, both in length and in style.  Poetic forms that are considerably visual, such as a concrete poem, are found towards the end of the collection.  Every spread is beautifully illustrated with lively paintings from Chris Raschka.  For every poetic form, Raschka includes a small icon to represent the form, and to signal to the reader that something new is coming.

Janeczko includes a very helpful introduction to prepare readers for the collection to follow, along with suggestions as to how to the read the book.  Backmatter includes more detailed information about each poetic form than is included throughout the book.  A list of acknowledgements at the end give credit to each of the contributing poets.

There are so many opportunities for poetry breaks given throughout this book, but one idea that struck me the most had to do with a found poem.  According to Janeczko, a found poem “is taken from a piece of writing that wasn’t written as poetry…and arranged on the page as a poem.”  The example given in the book is “The Paper Trail” by Georgia Heard:

“They fluttered from the sky like a sweet and peaceful snowstorm:

sheets and scraps – a crumpled page of cleaning instructions

with a reminder to damp-wipe smudges and smears;

a woman’s cell-phone bill;

a hand-written note on aper decorated with kitchen herbs read:

‘…it would be nice to have another pot-luck dinner for parents’;

a blank check numbered 3746 neatly torn from a check-book.

Bits of paper floated into the open classroom windows,

drifted into a second floor apartment window on Liberty Street.

At St. Paul’s Cathedral, in Lower Manhattan,

three inches blanketed old graves.”

In the backmatter, Janeczko admits that this is not a true found poem, as it is made largely of Heard’s own words, but the idea is still the same.  I have seen other examples of found poems, and one I have seen that I would love to try with students involves taking a page from a discarded or damaged book (and in a library, we have no shortage of those) and selecting words along the page to create a poem, highlighting them through artwork on the page itself.  I think a project like this would resonate with my older patrons.

Janeczko, Paul B., ed.  A Kick in the Head: An Everyday Guide to Poetic Forms.  Illustrated by Chris Raschka.  Cambridge, MA: Candlewick Press, 2005. ISBN: 9780763606626