“Homework sits on top of Sunday, squashing Sunday flat.” So begins one of the poems in the collection I
Thought I’d Take My Rat to School: Poems for September to June,
collected by Dorothy M. Kennedy and illustrated by Abby Carter. Simply entitled “Homework,” this poem by
Russell Hoban describes the way a child’s homework assignments weigh on them
when they are facing Monday morning (“Homework has the smell of Monday”) and
all the things the speaker would rather be doing instead. Other poems in this collection touch on such
school-y subjects as mathematics, classroom pets, art and daydreaming, as well
as offering different viewpoints about the schooling experience. Some are funny, some are touching, some are rather
odd.
This collection offers 57 poems from a variety of poets,
including well-known names such as Hoban, Nikki Giovanni, Jane Yolen, Jack
Prelutsky, Judith Viorst and Gary Soto, as well as some names with which I was
not as familiar, like Ramona Maher, X.J. Kennedy and Louis Phillips. Most poems had first appeared in other
collections.
I Thought I’d Take My Rat to School features a wide
variety of poems employing different styles and language. Some are very meaningful, such as “education”
by Nikki Giovanni and “I don’t understand” by Nikki Grimes (both featured on
the same page). Both invoke “Mama” and the
idea that education is important, and a way to elevate one’s life. Some poems are humorous, and have a bouncy
rhythm, like X.J. Kennedy’s “Teacher” (“My teacher looked at me and frowned/ A
look that must have weighed a pound”). “The
Eraser Poem” by Louis Phillips is a stylized poem, featuring the line “The
eraser poem” repeated over and over with one character missing from the end
until nothing is left. This creates a
visual triangle.
Many poems describe well-understood feelings about school,
including “Homework” by Jane Yolen, in which the speaker describes all the
things homework makes her want to do instead, such as writing thank you notes,
cleaning the litter box and taking out the garbage. The universally sullied reputation of school
cafeteria food is on display in “Lunch” by Katy Hall and the varied activities
of recess are explored in “In the Playground” by Stanley Cook. There are no overly sentimental poems in this
collection, but there are some that don’t quite live up to the quality of the
others. “Mixed-Up School” by X.J.
Kennedy aims for nonsense, but doesn’t have the verve to make it shine, and “Wind
Circles” by Aileen Fisher has beautiful imagery, but the flow of the words hit
a wall in the last thought and make the reader come to too abrupt a stop. This makes for a somewhat uneven collection.
While the black and white, wavy illustrations don’t offer
much in terms of diversity, there are some poems that offer an alternative
schooling experience, most notably Ramona Maher’s “September / Bini’ant’aatsoh”
(the Navajo word for September). It
tells of a girl named Alice Yazzie, and her one mile trip to the bus stop with
her grandfather.
The arrangement of the selected poems moves well, from “September
to June”, going throughout the school day from recess to lunch, etc. and down
to the last day of school. The layout,
the placement of the poems on the page, especially in conjunction with the
illustrations does not always work as smoothly.
Several times in the collection, a word will be partly obscured when
placed on top of a shaded segment of the illustration, making it difficult to
read. Often, a poem will be dropped all
the way to the bottom of a page, and to my taste, that is less pleasing to see.
One of my favorite poems in the collection is one accredited
to an anonymous poet, entitled, “Arithmetic”.
“Multiplication is
vexation,
Division is as bad;
The Rule of Three it
puzzles me,
And fractions drive
me mad.”
I run a program at my library called “Pajama Math,” wherein
we play math related games and do activities to make math fun. I can already imagine sharing this poem with
my group. Because of its rhyming scheme,
it is something to which I think it would be fun to add additional
stanzas. I could let the children tell
me their most feared, or vexing parts of arithmetic, and we could play with
syllable counts and numbers of rhyming lines.
I Thought I’d Take My Rat to School: Poems for September
to June. Selected by Dorothy M.
Kennedy. Illustrated by Abby
Carter. Boston; Little, Brown and
Company, 1993. ISBN: 9780316488938
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